A number of months ago, I came across the unfamiliar term “literary fiction”. What is Literary Fiction? There are various definitions and opinions, but the one that stood out for me is that with Literary Fiction “what is really important are the thoughts, desires, and motivations of the characters as well as the underlying social and cultural threads that act upon them”. (Nathan Bransford) (“ What Makes Literary Fiction Literary ”)
For me, “The Girl in the Box” is Literary Fiction. In the character of Caitlin Shaughnessy, as much as we think we know her thoughts, desires, and motivations, as the novel evolves so do these aspects of Caitlin’s personality. And in some ways, without even knowing it, the reader seeks that evolution, and the author delivers.
The human conditions existing in Guatemala are among the subjects tackled by Sheila Dalton. This book speaks to human relationships of love, friendship, trust, jealousy, pain, suffering, and enlightenment. The characters are complex and the plot line is intricate and deftly woven by the author.
The storyline is not linear, but rather, it is told from various characters’ perspective, back and forth over a time span of approximately six months. This means the reader must stay focused on who is speaking and telling the tale. I truly enjoy novels written in this style – it keeps me interested in ‘who will speak next’! If the reader is one who enjoys fiction with a chronological plot line, this book may be a challenge.
While not technically highlighted as a mystery novel, there were many elements of mystery throughout this novel. I found the most intriguing mysteries were between the characters, how relationships developed, changed, grew, and in some cases, deteriorated.
“The Girl in the Box” caught my attention before I finished the first page. And it still had my attention on the last page. I will qualify that by saying that, in the first part of the second half of the book I found the story started to slow down, and I found it a little tougher reading. There was a lot of descriptive narrative, and a lot of introspection by the character of Caitlin Shaughnessy. I found it slowed the pace of the novel, and I resisted the urge to skip a few pages. (I was really much too afraid I would miss something good!)
There was an added bonus to reading this book, and that was: Education. It is very clear that Sheila Dalton has an impressive knowledge of Guatemala, and the various political and social conflicts that have plagued that region for many years. It is also eye-opening to know that a number of these conflicts are current or recent history in nature. These also incorporate international issues that can affect everyday people, like you and I.
The murder victim’s life story included professional jealousies that exist specifically in the mental health profession, and generally within many professions today – and yesterday! It forces all of us to think twice about how we treat our co-workers on any level.

As a psychological drama, “The Girl in the Box” pulls the reader deeply into the lives of the characters. As a work of Literary Fiction, the motivations of the characters become intriguing puzzles. As a mystery, the ending brings everything together in one place, ties all the connections together.
To say that I thoroughly enjoyed this novel sounds trite given the nature of the book. But, it is true! I thoroughly enjoyed this novel!!
I surprised myself by my depth of involvement with the characters. The book became more about the characters, than about solving the murder mystery. I grew in my knowledge of some international issues. And the ending was one I accepted on an emotional level.
What more could I ask for?
In keeping with the theme of my blog, I ask myself “Where is the Joy?” in this book, in this review. Joy is an emotion we can choose. For me, the Joy in this book is found in the small shared moments of the characters with each other.
So very real.
Patricia
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Thank you!
Very intersting and informative. Thank you
Thank you, Heather.
Thank you for stopping by my blog!
Patricia
I agree, Heather. I think Patricia’s definition of what makes literary fiction literary is very helpful. It’s an ongoing question among writers and readers, and I’m not overly fond of the term, but the quote Patricia posted is one of the best I’ve read on the subject.
I thought of “Girl” as a “literary mystery”. Others say its either a mystery, or literary. My publisher calls it literary. Who knows? When you get right down to it, definitions are only guideposts, not cast in stone, aren’t they?
I agree, Sheila, definitions are only guideposts. Look at all the words we use now, that had completely different meanings for past generations.
I would agree with “Girl” as a Literary Mystery – for sure it is. Between Nathan Bransford’s definition, and your book, I have a much better understanding of “Literary Fiction”. At least for now…….
Patricia
Rancid, I happen to agree that local buneiessss are missing the boat when they do not have an online presence. Today, I dropped my sewing machine off for repairs. It has been awhile since I visited the repair shop. So I took a few minutes to look them up on line. Much to my surprise they had a fabulous Facebook fan page. Not only did I find out they were still in business, I found a nice discount coupon. When I arrived at the store I found that is was now being run by two young men that were very helpful and tech savvy. They had nice QR code displays. I mentioned that they did not have a website not to worry, it is on it’s way. Smart!
Hello Fathy –
I am curious, did you place your comment in the correct blog?
I do not know you Rancid is.
My apologies if I am missing the meaning of your comment.
Patricia
Thank you so much, Patricia! This is a thoughtful, intelligent review, and I much appreciate the time you took on it. I welcome the criticisms, mild and helpful as they are – I’m sure others would find the first part of the second half a little slow. It’s something I was aware of as I wrote, but could not write it any other way, to be true to my approach and my characters, and my own feelings about how the brain and the mind work.
Thanks again for your interest in my book. Among other things, it means I discovered your interesting blog.
You are welcome, Sheila!
Thank you for your interest in my Blog! It is encouraging.
The way the brain works in the writing process is mysterious!
But, in your case, it worked out just fine!!
Patricia